diff --git a/review.md b/review.md index db46a04..7d02455 100644 --- a/review.md +++ b/review.md @@ -41,16 +41,16 @@ Nothing [x] 92: "Values of total energy ..." => "Values of the total energy ..." [x] 98: "by number of spins ..." => "by the number of spins ..." [x] 162: Why are the equations for heat capacity and susceptibility in different environments? -Well, that is an excellent question! That I do not have an answer to, but I changed it so that both are in equation environment. +- janitaws: Well, that is an excellent question! That I do not have an answer to, but I changed it so that both are in equation environment. [x] 208: transition => transitions. "the Ising model" is singular. -The singular thing is really something I should have a look into! +- janitaws: The singular thing is really something I should have a look into! [x] 209: discontinous => discontinuous [x] 211: with => to [x] 217: "with an lattice" => "with a lattice" [x] 223: Should perhaps create a reference to his paper? -I agree, I had already added a reference but had forgotten to cite it in the report. I did not include a page number, don't think it is necessary since its what the paper finding? +- janitaws: I agree, I had already added a reference but had forgotten to cite it in the report. I did not include a page number, don't think it is necessary since its what the paper finding? [x] 224: "using finite lattices ..." => "using the finite lattices'". We are referring to specific lattices and "lattices" should be possessive. I would rewrite the second part to be "using the critical temperature of finite lattices of different sizes and linear regression." -I agree, it does make more sense +- janitaws: I agree, it does make more sense [x] 230: depend => depends. "the next sample" is singular. [x] 239: require => requires. "generating new random states" is singular. [x] 240: detaild => detailed