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Merge branch 'janitaws/latex' of github.uio.no:FYS3150-G2-2023/Project-4 into janitaws/latex

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[x] 92: "Values of total energy ..." => "Values of the total energy ..."
[x] 98: "by number of spins ..." => "by the number of spins ..."
[x] 162: Why are the equations for heat capacity and susceptibility in different environments?
Well, that is an excellent question! That I do not have an answer to, but I changed it so that both are in equation environment.
- janitaws: Well, that is an excellent question! That I do not have an answer to, but I changed it so that both are in equation environment.
[x] 208: transition => transitions. "the Ising model" is singular.
The singular thing is really something I should have a look into!
- janitaws: The singular thing is really something I should have a look into!
[x] 209: discontinous => discontinuous
[x] 211: with => to
[x] 217: "with an lattice" => "with a lattice"
[x] 223: Should perhaps create a reference to his paper?
I agree, I had already added a reference but had forgotten to cite it in the report. I did not include a page number, don't think it is necessary since its what the paper finding?
- janitaws: I agree, I had already added a reference but had forgotten to cite it in the report. I did not include a page number, don't think it is necessary since its what the paper finding?
[x] 224: "using finite lattices ..." => "using the finite lattices'". We are referring to specific lattices and "lattices" should be possessive. I would rewrite the second part to be "using the critical temperature of finite lattices of different sizes and linear regression."
I agree, it does make more sense
- janitaws: I agree, it does make more sense
[x] 230: depend => depends. "the next sample" is singular.
[x] 239: require => requires. "generating new random states" is singular.
[x] 240: detaild => detailed